Talk:Locked Out/@comment-29369588-20161118183425

My thoughts on 'Locked Out'

After watching this video, I've finally changed my thoughts on Jeffy, instead of being one of my favourite SML characters, I know think that he is good in general, but in this video, he's a total DISASTER.

Starting off with the plot, the idea of Jeffy locking Mario out of the house is a HUGE slap-in-the-face since it would make 75% of the audience provoked, which would also make Jeffy's reputation worse. Also, the video also drags the same part when Jeffy keeps locking Mario out WAY too much, and it's SERIOUSLY getting annoying! I actually think that Zinfandel's plot idea is MUCH more acceptable.

Then you have the humor, I will at least go easy on the humor, since it's the most tolerable element of this video, I won't say that there are many jokes, but I actually DID get some chuckles from this video, but that only comes from the first two and a half minutes of this video, the rest didn't really put me into the laugh zone, because there were BARELY any jokes in that moment. The humor itself isn't bad, but isn't special either.

But now it's time for the final but also the WORST element of this video, and that are the Characters. There are only four characters in this video, but only ONE character is likable in this video, and that is Mario, everyone else is either a douche bag or a retard. The reason why this is because Mario isn't a douche bag, nor a retard. Instead, he's quite innocent and guilt-free, but everyone else is not innocent. Jeffy is VERY out of character in this video. Instead of having his usual humorous and charming stupidness from his previous videos, he now acts like a complete back-stabber to Mario all just because of CHOCOLATE CAKE. Now because of this, Jeffy's behavior is reminding me of Jeffy's Bad Word, but sadly, even WORSE. The Brooklyn Guy is a complete video for thinking that Mario was drunk and trying to raid into the house, even though he KNOWS that Mario DOES live in this house. And Mr. Goodman was at least the second least hateable character. It's sad to realize that only ONE character was likable in this video, while the rest are such total assholes!

Overall, I give this video a 2 out of 10 with a Abysmal ranking, this video has totally shattered my potential for Jeffy and covered it with shit. I'm done, I need to calm myself down from this nightmare of a video, fuck it, I'm done.