Talk:Jeffy's Bad Word!/@comment-33323093-20180107020627

My Review

Plot:

This video game me mixed feelings as te video went on.

The First few minutes was good. The way that Jeffy said "Faggot" was funny. But the video got worse as it continued.

The first thing I hated was that Mario was accused of hitting a hobo, when in reality, the Hobo jumped onto the car, making that the first thing Mario is accused for which he's innocent for.

The second was the "Black Lives Matter" joke. That was funny, but the parts leading up to it wasn't. Mario was being called a rasist because Jeffy was calling the man a "Faggot", he just assumed it was Mario because he's white. This is also a play on sterotypes and rally offensive to both Black and White people.

The Third and in my opinion my least favorite part was Mario being accused of rape.

Mario simply spanked him, which is legal, but Jeffy passed it off as RAPE, since he touched his butt. Also, Rosalina, a clear witness to Mario simply spanking Jeffy, lied and also accused Mario of rape. Brooklyn Guy also said that all people who have mustaches are rapist, which is offensive to people who have them. Also, Mario was punished for "doing the right thing", which he didn't deserved. In any case, Rosalina should've been arrested, since lying about someone commiting a crime is considered a crime as well. Also, Jeffy should've got more than a spanking, but a grounding as well.

In fact, in my opinion, Locked Out was better than this video.

There were a few good thing though.

The first was the "Black Lives Matter" joke, as it brings social justice to African Americans and was overall hillarious.

The second was the alternate endings that people in these comments made. The would've made a better ending then the one SML gave it.

Charcters

This was of course, a Jeffy video, but the charaters were offset besides Mario

Rosalina was by far my least favorite so far. She lied and made Mario feel like a bad guy this episode, which could aslo lower her to Peach's status.

Jeffy cursed too much. I know it's called "Jeffy's Says a Bad Word", but still.

Overall

Characters : D-

Plot: F

Jokes: C+

Final Score: 3/10