Talk:Jeffy's Paper Shredder!/@comment-31231137-20180310050456

Wow. Just, wow. How the hell do you do this?! How the hell do you ruin a perfectly funny video in the last 2 minutes of it's 11.5 minute run?! OK, well, I loved the first 9.5 minutes of this video. I mean, I liked the return of Jeffy's animal noises, Mario's "eh eh eh" reaction when he found out Jeffy shredded his ticket was priceless, and, honestly, he is kind of to blame for it because he carelessly left his ticket there when he should've known Jeffy would do something like this. Brooklyn T. Guy's scene was, as always, great, and it was shaping up to be a great video. Yeah, the Goodman joke about Mario's nipples was cringe because of how overused it is, but that was really the only major flaw. Fast forward to the 9:26 mark, and I'm literally flailing my arms up in the air out of exasperation! OK, if you guys saw my worst SML videos of 2017 list, you know that much of the reason Jeffy's Shirt! topped the list was because of Goodman rubbing the check he stole from Mario in Jeffy in the former's face. Now, in theory, this isn't a huge problem. I thought him suing Wal-Mart and Domino's in The Bet! and The Fender Bender! was funny because it was lighthearted; he never went back to rub it in their faces. Maybe he did and we just didn't see it, but we'll give him the benefit of the doubt. Here, it was just as unbearable as it was in Jeffy's Shirt! I mean, seriously?! If he has a huge surplus of money for Mario's house payment, why couldn't he just use it for Mario's car payment?! I know, I know, his greed is his character, but the fact that he was willing to use the money for Mario's house payment and get more money out of Mario for his car payment, all this while he's letting the money Mario won from the lottery ticket sit in his bank is just awful! Just because it's his character doesn't mean I can't say it's a flaw in the video! It happened in the video, so therefore, I have the right to use it against the video! You know, this is the definition of a beautiful trainwreck. Everything was going fine for this video, and then, out of nowhere, it just comes crashing down and you just can't look away from it! And with Goodman, he was a really funny character for a while, and then his greed takes over his personality out of nowhere and we just can't look away from it! You know, honestly, I saw Dabhdude's video about why Logan should get rid of Jeffy, and if Logan does go through with that (which is like saying the dead will revive, but we shall see, seeing as how Logan wanted to go back in time and never introduce Jeffy), then I was thinking, "OK, if this is one of the last Jeffy videos, we're heading towards a pretty good way to go out." And Jeffy wasn't the problem here. Goodman, without a speck of doubt in my mind, is THE SML character who started off great, but has since turned into something detestable. I can't stand him anymore. Guys, I've rambled on long enough, and I could totally go on for another minute at least! But, hey, I've covered the basic ground here, and I've went on for far too long about 2 minutes of an 11.5 minute video. Logan, way to derail what could have been a great video.

Rating: D-