Talk:Jeffy's Bad Word!/@comment-34595515-20180311225637/@comment-30921093-20190324091654

Rh390110478, I think your Alternate ending needs some improvements. Here's my improvement.

Rosalina: Well, maybe you shouldn't have been such a f*****! Mario: YOU KNOW WHAT?! I'M DONE WITH THIS! (Mario leaves the living room) Mario: UGH! I CAN'T BELIEVE EVERYONE IS ACCUSING ME OF RAPING JEFFY! ALL I DID WAS SPANK HIM! I gotta do something about this! Hmm... Wait! I know what to do! (Mario enters the kitchen) Mario: Hey, Chef Pee Pee! Chef Pee Pee: Oh, hey Mario! What are you doing? Mario: Well, I need to borrow your security cameras. Were they up today? Chef Pee Pee: Yes, they're over there! Mario: Ok, thanks! (Mario takes the camera) Mario: Well, now I have to call Goodman to see this, and know I'm telling the truth! (Mario answers the phone) Mario: Come on... Pick up! (Goodman answers) Goodman: Hello? Mario: Hi, Goodman! Goodman: Oh, hey Mario! Mario: Well, Goodman. I need to ask you to do something. Goodman: Sure, as long as I get paid! Mario: Well, you know that news report you did saying I molested a child? Goodman: Um, yes? Mario: Well, I just realized I had footage taken of it, so can you come over and look? Goodman: Sure, what's in it for me? Mario: Well... Oh! If you come over and watch it to show I didn't rape my son, then I will give you a 1,000,000 dollar check! (Goodman gets dollar signs in his eyes) Goodman: Cha-ching! I'm gonna be rich! Sure, I'll come over! Just get me that check! Mario: Ok, good! See you there! (Mario hangs up) (The next day) (Goodman knocks on Mario's door) Mario: Hello? (Mario opens the door to meet Goodman) Goodman: Hey, Mario! I came over to see that video, and get that check! Mario: Ok! Just come in! Goodman: Ok. (Mario and Goodman arrive in the living room where Rosalina is sitting on the couch) Mario: Hi, Rosalina... Rosalina: Hey, child beater... Mario: Well, you see I bought Goodman here because- (Someone knocks at Mario's door) Mario: Hang on, I'll be right back! (Mario answers the door, and Brooklyn Guy is there with a swarm of Mario protesters) Brooklyn Guy: Everybody, say it with me! Mario prostesters: (chant) MARIO SUCKS! MARIO SUCKS! MARIO SUCKS! Mario: EVERYONE! SHUT UP! Brooklyn Guy: No! Because you raped a kid! Mario: Well, guess what? I got footage of what really happened! Brooklyn Guy: Oh, really? Mario: YES! Brooklyn Guy: Well, show us! Mario: Ok, come in! (Mario leads Brooklyn Guy into the house) Mario: Hey, Goodman! Brooklyn Guy is here! Brooklyn Guy: Ok! Let us see the video so we can know if we're right that Mario is lying! Mario: Hang on! Jeffy! Come in here! (Jeffy enters the room) Jeffy: What's up f*****? Mario: You know what? Let's just watch! (Mario, Rosalina, Brooklyn Guy, Goodman, and Jeffy watch the video of Mario spanking Jeffy) Mario: See guys? I told you! I only spanked him! Brooklyn Guy: Where did you get that? Rosalina: Yeah! How did you find this proof? Mario: I got it off the security camera! Jeffy: No, f*****! You clearly stuck your hand down my pants! Mario: Hey, Goodman! Look This video is true, right? Goodman: Oh, it's real all right! Jeffy: WHAT?! Goodman: Basically, on security footage, people are unable to edit the video so basically, this is 100% real footage! Mario: Well, now I'm gonna go show the footage to the news! Jeffy: NO YOU'RE NOT! (Jeffy tries to tackle Mario, but she is punched by Goodman) Rosalina: HEY! YOU CAN'T HIT HIM! HE'S BEEN THROUGH ENOUGH! Goodman: Sometime's I don't care... (Rosalina and Goodman argue with each other) Goodman: Mario, quick! Get to the news station! Mario: On it! (Mario runs into his car with the video, and drives to the news station) Jeffy: UNG... I MUST STOP HIM! (Jeffy gets into Brooklyn Guy's car and chase after Mario) Mario: I can't wait to clear my name! (Brooklyn Guy's car suddenly rams into the side of Mario's car) Mario: AAAAHHHHHH!!!!! Jeffy: GIVE ME THE FILM, F*****! Mario: NEVER! (Mario rams into Brooklyn Guy's car and runs Jeffy off the road) Jeffy: NO! Mario: YES! (Mario makes it to the news station, and runs in) Mario: Excuse me! I got to get this on the news! (Mario runs into the news room) Mario: Yes! I made it! (Jeffy arrives with Goodman tied up) Jeffy: STOP RIGHT THERE, MARIO! YOU'RE NOT SENDING THE VIDEO! Goodman: Mario! Help! Mario: Well, I'm going to post this on the news, and justice will be served! Jeffy: NEVER! (Jeffy tackles Mario and tries to choke him) Jeffy: Say goodbye, Mario! (Jeffy suddenly gets shot) Jeffy: OW! Mario: What the? (Simmons was the one who shot Jeffy) Brooklyn Guy: NICE SHOT, SIMMONS! Simmons: Mario! Quick! The video! Mario: Got it! Jeffy: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! (Jeffys leap at Mario, but Mario succesfully lands the tape into the player) Mario: YES! (The video of Mario spanking Jeffy is shown on the news, revealing the truth to everyone in the world) Mario: Guys, there's nothing left you can do... It's over... Jeffy: Oh, really?! WELL I STILL HAVE GOODMAN! Goodman: Let me go! (All of a sudden, the SWAT team, and Mario protesters burst into the news building) M&M'S Chief: STEP AWAY FROM THE GUY WITH THE RED HAT! Mario: YES! HELP! Jeffy: WAIT! WHAT'S GOING ON?! M&MS Chief: Jeffy! You three are under arrest for accusing this guy of rape, and attemped to murder a millionaire! Brooklyn Guy: I really can't NOT believe that the security footage was faked. M&M'S Chief: A spanking is legal as long hehas no bruises. (M&M'S Chief sees no bruises on Jeffy's Butt.) Brooklyn Guy: You tell them boss. Jeffy: BUT DADDY STUCK HIS HANDS DOWN MY PANTS! M&M'S Chief: WELL, YOU'RE MENTALLY RETARDED! Brooklyn Guy: Protesters, What do you think now? (Mario protesters alter their signs to where they now say MARIO RULES!) Brooklyn Guy: LONG LIVE THE NINTENDO MASCOT! Simmons, how did my car get here? Simmons: Well, I saw Jeffy chasing Mario down the highway by driving your car! M&M'S Chief: ENOUGH! Now you are coming with us, Jeffy! Jeffy: MARIO! PLEASE! DON'T LET ME GO TO JAIL! HAVE MERCY! Mario: No, Jeffy, It's time to put a stop to this! Rosalina: Maybe, I might get frustrated with Jeffy at some point! Jeffy: DADDY! PLEASE! I DON'T WANT TO GO TO JAIL! I PROMISE I'LL BE A GOOD BOY! Mario: Would I really think you'd keep your promise! I don't think so, Jeffy... M&M'S Chief: Ok, come with me! Jeffy: CURSE YOU, MARIO! (M&M'S Chief drive Jeffy to jail) (Later, on the news) Goodman: BREAKING NEWS! M'Kay, Mario has finally revealed that he didn't rape a child, but only spanked him, so to compensate for him, we have given him a 200,000 check to make up for it... Oh, yeah! Since I helped him, He also gave me a million dollar check! WHOO! I'M RICH! (Cut to Mario watching TV) Mario: Glad everything's been cleared up... (Meanwhile at prison) Jeffy: PLEASE! SOMEONE BAIL ME OUT! HURRY! IT'S ALMOST TIME FOR BUBBLES TO COME IN! (9:30 Rings) Jeffy: OH NO! (Bubbles enters the cell) Bubbles: RAPE TIME!!! Jeffy: NNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

What do you think of my modified version of your alternate ending, Rh390110478? I just didn't think getting Rosalina and Brooklyn Guy getting pulled in with Jeffy made ANY sense. Plus, a baby could possibly be made if Rosalina gets raped by Bubbles. If you don't like it, It's fine by me. But I hope you DO like it. Modified so that Rosalina and Brooklyn Guy are on Mario's side and Jeffy chases Mario instead.