Talk:Jeffy's Paper Shredder!/@comment-34595515-20180311013529

Here's my alternate ending to Jeffy's Paper Shredder! But on this one I may as well call it part 2 of the video. It would be called SML Movie: The Fraud!

(After Goodman leaves with Mario's lottery ticket)

Goodman: Ha.. I can't believe I just scammed Mario again!

(Unknown to Goodman, Mario hears what he said)

Mario: Wait, what's he talking about?

(Mario decides to sneak underneath Goodman's car, as Goodman is about to drive away, Mario clings to the underside of the car, and Goodman drives off not knowing Mario is following him.)

Mario: Where is he going?

(Mario sees Goodman stopping at a mansion, which has a gold G on the front, which stands for Goodman)

Mario: Hmm.. This must be his mansion.

(After Goodman enters his mansion, Mario sneaks out from underneath the car)

Mario: I wonder what it's like in there...

(Mario enters Goodman's mansion)

Mario: Woah! This looks really fancy!

(Mario hears Goodman coming, and quickly hides under the dinner table)

Goodman: Now, that I've conned Mario, now to check on my prisoner...

Mario: Wait, what prisoner?

(Mario watches Goodman walk to his fireplace, suddenly he hits a button that is on a picture and the fireplace turns into a secret stairway, Goodman proceeds to walk into the secret stairway.)

Mario: What's in there...

(Mario follows Goodman into the stairway, and sees Goodman unlock a rusty door and enter)

Mario: What the-

(Mario is interuppted by the sound of a man screaming and getting whipped)

Unknown Man: OW! STOP IT!

Mario: WHAT THE HECK?!

(Mario nervously looks into the cell, and to his horror discovers Goodman whipping a man that looks exactly like him)

Unknown Man: PLEASE! HAVE MERCY!

Goodman: Hey, Brother! Guess what happened today!

Mario: Wait, brother?

Goodman: I just conned this guy named Mario out of a 350 million dollar lottery ticket!

Unknown Man: YOU WON'T GET AWAY WITH THIS, BROTHER!

Goodman: Oh, but I've already had...

(Goodman whips the man a final time before leaving, while Mario hides under a desk as Goodman exits the room)

Mario: Who is that?

(Mario enters the cell and heads towards the man)

Unknown Man: PLEASE! NO MORE! I CAN'T SUFFER MUCH MORE!

Mario: Listen, I'm not Goodman. Who are you?

Unknown Man: Wait, who are you? You look familiar...

Mario: Well my name is Mario. Now can you tell me who you are-

Unknown Man: Wait, Mario? Is that really you?

Mario: How did you know my name?

Unknown Man: Remember,I was the officer who came to your house, you called me when you were getting Call of Duty Black Ops II from GameStop, and I helped some yellow bird with his speech impediment!

(Mario suddenly has a flashback of the times Goodman was at his old house)

Mario: GOODMAN?! IS THAT YOU?!

Real Goodman: Yes! I'm the real Goodman!

Mario: WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!

Real Goodman: Well, here's what happened...

(Flashback occurs)

Real Goodman: When I was leaving your house one time after helping fix the cable, I was just driving to my mansion...

(Flashback suddenly stops for a moment)

Mario: So Wait? This is your mansion?

Real Goodman: Yes, now let me continue please...

Mario: Ok.

(Flashback continues)

Real Goodman: Anyways, as I was driving to my mansion, a car suddenly T-boned me!

(A car rams into Goodman's car knocking him out)

Real Goodman: After I was knocked out... I woke up in my mansion. At first, I thought it was a dream... But there was a masked man in front of me and I noticed I was chained to the wall!

(The man reveals his face to Goodman, and he looks just like Goodman, but with a scar on one of his eyes, and a black eye on his other eye)

Real Goodman: It was my brother, Badman!

Goodman: Wait, Brother?! What are you doing?! Let me go?!

(Badman slaps Goodman)

Badman: Oh, I don't think that's possible Goodman. And don't worry about Mario. I'll take "great" care of him... Also, GIVE ME THAT!!!

(Badman grabs Goodman and steals his bank account password)

Goodman: HEY! THAT'S MINE!

Badman: And you're identity? Ha! It will be mine now!

(Badman leaves Goodman in the cell screaming)

Goodman: Afterwards, he made a mask to look like me!

(Badman exits a room looking just like Goodman and laughs madly)

(Flashback ends)

Mario: Damn, but what happened to your body, you're all thin, and there scars all over you!

Goodman: Well, he beat me, whipped me, starved me, and bit off my nipples, and played jump rope with them!

Mario: Oh... Well, Don't worry! I'll help you escape!

Goodman: Ok, thanks... but usually when Badman leaves my cell, he always locks the door leading in here, but there is still a way out...

Mario: Where?

Goodman: See those air vents? They lead throughout all the rooms in my mansion. If you can get to Badman, the keys to my chain are in his pocket.

Mario: Ok, I'll be back with the keys!

(Mario opens the air vent and crawls inside)

Goodman: Good Luck, Mario!

(Mario crawls through a passage of air vents, and sees Badman in the kitchen)

Mario: Hmm... Oh! I know how to get the keys!

(Mario exits the vent leading outside of the mansion, and runs to his house and gets some pills out of his medicine cabinet)

Mario: Perfect...

(Mario gets into his car and drives to Goodman's mansion and knocks on the door)

Badman: Who could that be?

(Badman answers the door and finds Mario)

Badman: (pretending to be Goodman): Oh, hey, Mario, how are you doing?

Mario: (playing along) Oh, I was just coming to your house for dinner, because since you won the lottery I wanted to come over for dinner to congratulate you.

Badman: Ok, Mario! Come inside!

(Badman leads Mario to the dinner room and pours two cups of tea)

Badman: Now, wait here, while I go get the turkey!

Mario: Ok, Goodman!

(Badman enters the kitchen)

Mario: Now's my chance...

(Mario sneaks the pills into Badman's tea)

Badman: Hey, Mario! I'm back with the turkey!

Mario: That looks delicious!

(Badman puts the turkey on a plate, and he and Mario start eating it)

Mario: So, Goodman, how does it feel to win 350 million dollars?

Badman: Oh, It's great Mario! I'm gonna be so rich, I'll be richer then Bill Gates!

(Badman drinks the tea that was drugged by Mario)

Mario: (looks at his phone) YES!

Badman: What is it, Mario?

Mario: Rosalina told me she is coming over for a date!

Badman: Well, that sounds good, Mario!

(Badman suddenly feels tired)

Badman: Oh, I don't feel too good...

(Badman passes out from the pills, which turn out to be sleeping pills)

Mario: Perfect! Now to get the keys!

(Mario heads to Badman and takes the keys to Goodman's chain, then heads into Goodman's cell)

Mario: Goodman! I got the keys!

Goodman: Nice, Mario! How did you get them?

Mario: Oh, I just knocked out Badman with sleeping pills.

Goodman: Clever.

(Mario uses the key to unlock Goodman's chain)

Goodman: Yes! Thank you, Mario!

Mario: You're Welcome! Now let's get you out of here...

(Mario puts Goodman in his car, and drives to his house. Meanwhile, Badman wakes up after the sleeping pills wear off)

Badman: Uhh... What happened?

(Badman notices Mario is gone)

Badman: Mario? Where did you go?

(Badman notices his keys are gone)

Badman: Uh Oh...

(Badman rushes to Goodman's cell and finds that Goodman is gone)

Badman: (furious) MMMAAARRRIIIOOO!!!!!!!!

(At Mario's house)

Mario: Ok, Goodman, here is my current house.

Goodman: Wow! This looks very cool, Mario!

(Goodman notices the secret door)

Goodman: Um, what is in there, Mario?

Mario: (worried) Oh, just something I'd really want to forget...

Goodman: Ok.

Mario: Well, Goodman, since you haven't ate in a while, back in the cell, you can just help yourself to all the food I've got.

Goodman: Ok, thanks Mario!

(Goodman enters the kitchen to eat dinner for the first time in months)

Mario: Right now, I've got to make a call...

(Mario talks to someone on the phone and hangs up)

Mario: Ok, they should be here any minute...

(Mario hears a knock at the door)

Mario: Who could that be?

(Mario opens the door)

Mario: Hello-

(Mario is suddenly punched in the face by someone. When Mario looks up, it is Badman)

Badman: WHERE'S GOODMAN?!

Mario: What are you talking about?

Badman: YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!!! NOW WHERE THE FUCK IS GOODMAN??!!

(Mario screams, and runs upstairs)

Badman: COME HERE!!!

(Mario runs into the game room, and finds Black Yoshi playing Call of Duty, and notices there is a bomb next to him)

Mario: Hey, Black Yoshi?

Black Yoshi: What do you want folk?

Mario: Well, can I borrow that bomb?

Black Yoshi: Sure!

Mario: Ok, thanks!

(Mario takes the bomb)

Badman: MARIO?! WHERE ARE YOU??!!!

Mario: RIGHT HERE!!

(Badman looks at Mario)

Mario: Eat this...

(Mario throws the bomb at Badman, and it blows up destroying Badman's Goodman disguise)

Badman: NO! MY IDENTITY!!! YOU'RE GONNA PAY FOR THAT MARIO! I'M GOING TO BITE OFF YOUR NIPPLES, JUST LIKE I DID WITH GOODMAN!!!

(Badman rushes upstairs)

Badman: MARIO!! COME OUT, COME OUT, WHEREVER YOU ARE!!!

Mario: HEY, BADMAN!!

(Badman sees Mario at the end of the hallway)

Mario: Come at me...

(Badman rushes at Mario, but Mario steps out of the way, and Badman falls out the window and lands on the ground, at that moment Rosalina arrives at the house for her date with Mario)

Rosalina: (notices Badman) WHO IS THAT?!

Badman: COME HERE!!!

(Badman chases Rosalina into the house)

Rosalina: MARIO!!! HELP!!!

Mario: OH NO!

(Badman tackles Rosalina, and aims a gun at her)

Badman: Any last words?

Rosalina: PLEASE! DON'T KILL ME!!!

Badman: WHERE IS MARIO?!!

Rosalina: I'LL NEVER TELL!!!

Mario: LEAVE MY WIFE ALONE!!!

(Mario jumps off the balcony and lands on Badman releasing Rosalina who rushes into the kitchen, and finds Goodman eating some cupcakes, and his body is back to normal size)

Goodman: Oh, Hi there! Who are you?

Rosalina: Well, my name is Rosalina, and... RIGHT NOW, THERE IS A PSYCHO TRYING TO KILL MARIO!!!

Goodman: UH OH! MARIO, I'M COMING!!!

(Goodman rushes out of the kitchen, and in the living room Mario is wrestling Badman for the gun)

Mario: GIVE ME THE GUN!!!

Badman: NEVER!!!

(Someone knocks at the door)

Mario: THE DOOR!!!

Badman: NO!!!

(Badman shoots Mario in the leg)

Mario: OW!!!

Badman: NOW!! TELL ME WHERE GOODMAN IS??!!!

Goodman: RIGHT HERE, BROTHER!!!

(Goodman rushes into the room, and tackles Badman)

Badman: LET ME GO!!!

Goodman: NEVER!!!

(Upstairs, Jeffy hears the noise and notices Goodman attacking Badman)

Jeffy: DON'T WORRY! I'LL STOP HIM!

(Jeffy runs into the game room, and pushes the couch towards the balcony)

Jeffy: HEY!

(Goodman, Badman, and Mario notice Jeffy about to push the couch off the balcony)

Mario: GOODMAN!! GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!

(Jeffy throws the couch off the balcony and Goodman runs out of the way, and the couch crushes Badman)

Mario: GREAT JOB JEFFY!!!

(Mario, and Goodman pull the couch off of Badman)

Mario: IS HE DEAD?!

Goodman: (after listening for a heartbeat) No, he isn't dead. He's just knocked out...

Mario: Well, I'm going to go get the door.

(Mario rushes to the door and opens it to find Brooklyn Guy, and a force of officers)

Brooklyn Guy: Hey- OH MY GOD! WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR LEG?!

Mario: Well... just come in, okay...

Brooklyn Guy: Alright.

(Brooklyn Guy enters the house, and finds the chaos that occured in the house)

Brooklyn Guy: OH MY GOD! WHAT HAPPENED TO THE ROOM!

Mario: Well, maybe Goodman can tell you what happened...

Brooklyn Guy: Ok, hey Goodman do you know what happened?

Goodman: Here, let me tell you...

(After Brooklyn Guy and the cops listen to Goodman's story)

Brooklyn Guy: So the guy knocked out right now is your brother Badman?

Goodman: Yes, that is him...

Brooklyn Guy: Ok, well Badman is coming with us, and someone take Mario to an ambulance.

Simmons: Got it Brooklyn!

(Brooklyn Guy drags the knocked out Badman into his police car, and Simmons puts Mario in an ambulance)

Brooklyn Guy: Well, this guy sure is getting prison for life.

(Brooklyn Guy drives Badman to prison, while the ambulance takes Mario to the hospital)

(At the hospital)

Brooklyn Guy: Ok, the bullet dislocated Mario's left leg so he's gonna be in a wheelchair for a few weeks, but other than that, he's gonna be fine.

Bowser: Well, that's a relief!

Bowser Junior: Wow! Jeffy, I can't believe you stopped a gunman!

Joseph: Yeah, that's pretty cool dude!

Cody: Ken says that Jeffy is awesome!

Joseph: HE'S A DOLL DUDE!!!

Rosalina: So, Mario. How's your leg gonna be?

Mario: Well, the doctor said I'll have to be in a wheelchair for a while, though we can still have that date...

Rosalina: Yeah. Hopefully, your leg will be fine...

Mario: Yeah I hope so too...

(Meanwhile at a prison, Badman is thrown into his cell)

Brooklyn Guy: Into your cell, psycho!

Badman: So, Mario may have saved Goodman, and got me in prison, but little does he know, that eventually I will escape, and kill Mario, then i'm going to kill all his friends, his family, and everyone he holds dear to him!!

(Badman laughs evily)

Brooklyn Guy: Badman, time for bed!!!

Badman: Damn...

Well, that's my alternate ending! Let me guys know if you liked it! Maybe you guys can suggest what alternate endings I can do for other SML videos. Well, I hope you enjoyed my ending