Talk:Jeffy the Karate Master!/@comment-24047143-20191207004223

4/10

-Th e plot is literally a rehash of "Bowser Junior Learns Karate!", only this time karate isn't the main focus. The title should be "Jeffy Learns Self-Defense!", because that seems to be what this video is going for. -The scene where Mario puts Jeffy to bed drags on far too long and can almost immediately be considered filler. -This is Brooklyn T. Guy's 6th appearance in a row! I must admit, even I think he's pretty overused at this point. -The Scooby-Doo reference at the end. A tad cliché, don'cha think? -The biggest problem with the video: it's PREACHY AS HELL! The writing seems to lack all subtlety and is only interested in hammering in the "don't talk to strangers" message to the point where it becomes downright intolerable; not to mention the fact that this was already done before in "Bowser Junior's Bodyguard!" in a similarly on-the-nose manner. It seems this was done by Logan to appeal to kids, but I don't wanna jump to any conclusions.

+Mario's appearance thankfully hasn't changed. +Tyrone as a self-defense instructor was pretty funny. +Jeffy hissing at Mario was also pretty funny. +So was Jeffy slamming the car door on Brooklyn T. Guy's face, even if it has to be shoeshorned into the final message at the end.

In conclusion, I really didn't like the video, so much so that I had to give it a thumbs down (which I've never actually done for an SML video before).