Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-33072942-20180311225218

Welcome to a new series on the SML wiki called "How I'd Write". In this series, I take an SML episode and write it right. I'll start with an episode that wasn't written good at all, Black Yoshi's Call of Duty Special Edition. Since the premise of the episode is about robbing GameStop, I'll call this new version "Black Yoshi's Heist!"

The episode will start normally until the scene after the commercial. Then, Black Yoshi would go to the airport instead of directly onto the plane (that's not possible). He see Mario and Rosalina sitting over by the gate, and asks Mario to buy him the game. Mario refuses, as there's nowhere in the airport selling the game, but tells him that he can find another way to get money. Black Yoshi's then goes home to find some.

Black Yoshi searches the couch cushions, but doesn't find any money. He then decides to steal the game that night, but realizes he can't pull off a heist alone. He then hears Bowser Junior and his friends playing in the next room over, and goes to ask them to help him rob GameStop.

Bowser Junior and his friends agree to help Black Yoshi, and are each assigned roles. Cody will hack into the security cameras to turn them off for the duration of the heist, and gives each of them a walkie-talkie to communicate. Joesph will help bust them in through the vents. And Junior will be outside to distract the Brooklyn Guy.

Later that night, we see the Brooklyn Guy, closing GameStop to go home. He then remembers he hated his wife and decides to stay. But before he can unlock the door, Junior plays "Safety Dance" on his phone. Since that's Brooklyn Guy's favorite song, he stays out and dances to it. With the Brooklyn Guy distracted, Joesph can open the vent. While they crawl through, Cody turns off the cameras.

Black Yoshi successfully grabs the game, but then, the song ends and the Brooklyn Guy decides to go back into the store. The kids make it back into the vent, but the Brooklyn Guy sees Black Yoshi holding the box. He almost calls the cops, but then remembers he is one and arrests Black Yoshi. Junior and Joesph tell Cody that Black Yoshi was arrested. They then all go home.

Well, what did you think? Leave your answers below. See you next time when I rewrite "The Competition!" 