Talk:The Ring/@comment-26942270-20161028222400

SML idea Lord of the flies

Chapter one - It was morning and bowser junior was woken by his chef called chef peepee who shouted "wake up junior, it's time for school". A similar situation happened with jeffy as his legal guardian woke him up and got him ready for school. When at school junior and jeffy met their friends Cody, toad and Joseph, "hey dude" cried Joseph, "hi Joseph" was junior's reply. They then sat down in class and were given the following information from the principal "alright you irritating little brats! As you all know you all applied go to the trip to Japan, so you will be going to the airport in a hour. Remember to do as you are told by the adults there and I will have a relaxing time." They then went to the airport and went aboard the plane. Jeffy curious asked Cody a question, "Cody, how come we have to wear these belt things?" Cody replied with "because jeffy if the plane crashes and we don't have them on we might die." Joseph then said "man, I wish we didn't have to be with these adults, then we wouldn't have to follow rules." Later on the way to Japan the most important boys in this story went on with their usually hobbies, junior talked with Joseph and toad, Cody did homosexual things with his doll Ken and jeffy was patting his diaper. All seemed to be going well until the plane was struck by a bolt of lightning. All the students started panicking but then they a got a message from the captain who said "all right everyone calm down. I am your captain and I go by the name Brooklyn T guy and if you haven't already buckle your seat belts, if you do you'll survive the crash, not sure if I will since the designers of this plane didn't include seat belts for us who fly the plane for some reason." The plane then crashed on a nearby island and all the students were knocked out. After a unknown period of time they all woke up and they all gathered together in order to figure out what to do. Junior then gave out a idea that had everyone agreeing, "guys, in order to survive on this island we need a chief to guide us until we spot a navy ship so we need to vote for a chief." Cody then shouted out "Vote for me! Since I am the smartest of us all here I think it would make sense for me to lead you all." All the boys then burst into laughter with junior saying "Cody, we don't want to follow orders from a nerd like yourself, everyone is agreeing with me, anyone else think they should be chief ?" Jeffy then said "pick jeffy to be chief" which Cody then replied to the others by saying "guys, jeffy has a pencil in his nose, do you really want to take orders from him?" With everyone not voting for Jeffy Joseph then yelled out "vote for me! I'm the captain of the basketball team at school, I'm sure to lead you all through this island and-" before he could finish junior interrupted by screaming out "Guys vote for me! I've killed people who have broken into my house! I'm sure to help survive on this island!" Junior then instantly won the votes when he said his reasons and then continued to speak, "alright guys in order to survive on this island we need two things, rules and hunters. The rules shall be no killing each other, ask me if you’re allowed to make a speech and bed will be when the sun is down and the sky is black. The hunters will be led by Joseph and he will be allowed to pick who will be his hunters." Joseph then said "thanks dude! Alright the only people I don't to be my hunters are junior since he is chief, jeffy and Cody. The rest of you will make great hunters." Jeffy then asked "Joseph, what's hunting?" Joseph replied by saying "it's when you go looking for animals to kill." Jeffy now a bit depressed then said "well glad I'm not hunting." With everything set up the boys were ready for their time of survival on the island.

Chapter Two – Later Junior then assembled the boys for a meeting where he said the following “Alright guys, we have been here for 6 days and we haven’t made a fire to signal a passing ship to come and rescue us.” Cody then blurted out “So you’re saying we should make a fire?” Junior then said “Yeah that’s it, only I don’t know how to make one.” All the hunters then yelled out “Use Cody’s glasses to reflect the light of the sun to create the fire!” And so that is what the boys all did and junior then had a discussion with joseph telling him the following “Alright Joseph, I am trusting you and your hunters to keep the fire going so it can signal a passing ship.” “Yeah, sure whatever dude.” Replied Joseph. “Thanks Joseph glad you listened to all that.” Said Junior. Later Junior, Cody and Jeffy were sitting on the edge of the beach cliff waiting for a ship to pass by. Jeffy was on the lookout for a ship and was asked by junior “Jeffy have you seen a ship yet?” “No, all I see is this giant metal shark.” Cody then struck by pure stupidity said “Jeffy that’s not a shark, it’s a ship!” All three of them were so excited they all ran in circles 3 times. Cody then said “how come the ship isn’t coming to the island” “I don’t know, is the fire still going?” said junior. They all looked at the mountain where they created the fire and saw that the smoke was no longer there. Cody then exploded into rage with his angry words exploding out him of screaming out “WHERE THE HELL IS JOESPH AND HIS HUNTERS WATCHING THE FIRE?! To answer Cody’s question Joseph and his hunter were out hunting pigs in the jungle, like their previous attempts at hunting they had trouble with the pig they saw. After a long battle with it they managed to kill the savage creature. They then carried its corpse back to the camp but were greeted by a furious Junior and Cody. Junior Then Furiously walked up to Joseph and asked “Where the hell were you Joseph?! You were supposed to be making sure the fire didn’t go out and you disappeared and it went out!” Joseph “Well, err, I remembered that we were supposed to be collecting meat for you guys so we had to go and look for animals but actually try and get one this time” Junior then replied with “Oh, well I understand why you-“ Cody then interrupted with “Joseph you just wanted an excuse to hunt!” Joseph then pleadingly asked “Can we please cook this pig now? I’m starving for meat.” Cody and Junior reluctantly agreed and created a new fire to cook the dead pig. As they were eating an unfriendly conversation stirred up starting with Cody saying “If you are always going to go off hunting when you’re supposed to watch the fire to signal a ship, we are never going to get rescued”. “Well what if I and my hunters don’t want to be rescued four eyes?!” Yelled Joseph. “Why would you even ask that Joseph?” asked Cody. “Well even though my mom’s dead I and all of guys still have to follow the rules set by society because of police officers and the school teachers. On this island however there are no adults to tell us what to do, but we have the stupid idea of setting up rules for us and I won’t have it! I will set up my own tribe for surviving on the island with no rules! And for those that want to join me follow me!” The hunters followed Joseph into the jungle only leaving Junior, Cody and Jeffy as the only sane ones on the island and the only ones with the intent of being rescued.

Chapter 3- After the violent row Cody then spoke out “So now that we and Joseph have gone our separate ways, I feel like we should create our own hideout for our survival on this island.” Jeffy then responded with “but how we do that?” Cody then answered the question with “Simple, we use all the items we can find to create our camp	.” And with that the 3 children set to creating their camp for survival. After a building montage their camp was completed and the boys had nothing to do but look in awe. “Man this looks cool.” Said junior, Cody replied with “Yep, it’s my design. Who believes nerd aren’t creative?” Jeffy then asked “Guys that are those two doing here?” “What guys?” Junior asked. Jeffy then pointed to Patrick and Felipe two boys that also survived the plane crash. Junior, Jeffy and Cody then listened to their conversation and heard the following “Felipe, I can’t wait for the feast joseph has planned for us tonight.” Felipe responded with “Yeah, and he tells us it won’t be a pig.” Interested on what they meant Junior, Cody and Jeffy followed the two boys to Joseph’s camp and listened to Joseph’s speech about dinner which was “Dudes for the few days after we left Junior’s stupid group we have been hunting and eating nothing but pigs and other animals. Well tonight I think it is time we eat something different, I suggest tonight we cook and eat Junior, Cody and Jeffy. It’s time we eat a different type of meat and I think we should start with those pathetic boy scouts that want go home to their parents, so we shall search the island for them and bring them back to camp for the feast !” After hearing the intimidating speech the three boys started back away but were discovered when Jeffy let out a gigantic fart which lead to Joseph screeching out “THERE THEY ARE!!! CAPTURE THEM AND GET THEM READY FOR THE FEAT!!!!!” which was followed by Cody screeching out “RUN!!!!!” The 3 boys started to run as fast as they could until Cody stepped into a trap which left him dangling up in a tree and saying to Junior and Jeffy “Forget me, save yourselves.” Regretting Jeffy and Junior left Cody until a net was thrown on Jeffy and some of the boys dragged Jeffy away with him screaming, Toad, now being Joseph’s second in command said “Alright dudes, take Jeffy back to camp, I and the others will chase down Junior.” Junior then ran so fast he outran Toad and the others and hid in a tree. At first Junior believed he lost them and at first was wondering how to rescue Cody and Jeffy until he was hit on the head and went blank.

Chapter Four – Junior slowly began to wake up, he noticed that he Cody and Jeffy were tied up together on a stick and Jeffy then asked “Um guys, what you think they are going to do to us?” Cody replied with “Well, considering Joseph said he was going to cook us and eat us I would say that is what they are going to do with us. “What led Joseph to become cannibal?” asked Junior Cody replied with “Probably due to there being no adults to tell him the rules of society.” Suddenly Toad and Patrick came in and carried the 3 boys on the stick to a fire and placed them on a stick above the fire to get them ready for the feast. Joseph then walked out to witness the 3 boys being cooked only to be asked by Cody “Joseph, why did you and these other boys decide to become cannibals?” Joseph then said “Well, unlike you and Junior Jeffy is human not a koopa, and my hunters are human and you and Junior aren’t. And toad is neither a human or a koopa so it all won’t be cannibalism.” Cody then said “Yeah but ……. You know what forget it, I just want be eaten already, I’m tired of living in a world full of idiots.” After that conversation Joseph had his hunters turning the 3 boys tied to the stick around the fire to cook them. After a while of the 3 boys being turned around above the fire Joseph and his hunters suddenly turned their attention to a wild pig they saw with Joseph shouting “Leave them for now!!! Let’s get that pig for tomorrows dinner!!!!” and then Joseph and his hunters chased after the pig. “How are we going to get out of here Cody?” Asked Junior, Cody replied with “Well Junior I want die so I can escape this world of idiots, but I do think we have to take down Joseph now so we have to find a way out of this trap.” Jeffy then said “When we out of these ropes I can’t wait to get my sharp pencil up my nose.” “Wait, you have a sharp pencil?” said Cody. “Yeah” said Jeffy. “I think we can use it to escape since its sharp!” said Cody. And so Cody grabbed the pencil from Jeffy’s pocket and used it to cut the ropes. The 3 then ran as fast as they could away from Joseph’s camp before Joseph and his hunters returned to the camp with the dead pig they killed. Back at their own camp they had a discussion about what they should do next and the conversation started with Cody saying “Alright guys, Joseph is probably still wanting to capture us and we don’t have any weapons to combat Joseph and his hunters.” “So what do you suggest we do Cody?” asked Junior. Cody then suddenly replied with “I suggest we make our own spears to be ready for combat against Joseph and his hunters!” and with that a montage began with them building spears for the big battle and after they were finished they were ready for the war.

Chapter Five – The 3 boys then started to look for Joseph and his hunters for the big battle, at first it was hard to find them until they eventually bumped into Joseph and who were also looking for them. “Looks like we finally found you dudes! You were surpassed to be the meal for the night but instead you managed to escape! I don’t care what it will take but this will end with either me you 3 dying!” Shouted Joseph. Junior responded with “You’re goddamn right!” And so the battle began, junior and his friends threw bombs made from fruit which were extremely effective against Joseph and his hunters and threw spears at them which also injured the hunters. Eventually Joseph had enough with his hunters failing so he shouted out “Let loose the fire dudes!” And with that command the hunters let loose the fire on the grass, the fire then chased Junior Cody and Jeffy into the forest with the hunters also chasing after the 3 boys. The fire also started to cover up the forest created smoke which made it hard for the boys to see where they were going so they just had to continue walking in a straight line. As they were running a spear flew out of the air and impaled Cody though the chest, Cody then made a last request to Junior which was “Junior, please take care of ken for me.” “I will, I shall for you Cody.” Said Junior. Junior and Jeffy then continued to run until a spear also impaled Jeffy with Jeffy saying to Junior “Please, save yourself and leave Jeffy!” Junior then regrettably said “Alright, please fight till your dying breath against these hunters!” Junior then ran finally out of the forest and onto the beach where he bumped into a navy officer. Junior then asked “Wait weren’t the pilot on the plane I was on?” The officer then responded with “No that was my brother Brooklyn T guy I’m what guy” “Well that’s a weird name” said Junior. What guy then asked “So what have you and the other boys on the island been doing” Junior responded with “We were forced to have a war” What guy then said “What?!” Junior then said “Yeah, I was shocked to find out I had to go to war. And how did you get the island?” What guy responded with “Well, your war seems to have started a fire which has now engulfed the entire island” Eventually Joseph and his hunter came out of the forest and onto the beach and What guy then witnessed the savages the boys had become and said It’s going to take a lot of work to get these boys back to being civilised, going to have to search the island for more of these boys.”