Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-34777209-20170714014840/@comment-32595453-20170714020802

I saw it, and it seemed like my worst nightmare of Jeffy basically screwing over and taking over Mario's life in an SML Video was realized, although in a reality show. I can tell it was rushed, but Tito was one of the only good things in the video and he was the villain of the video. The fact that the Reality TV show got so bad that Jeffy pretty much screwed over and took over Mario's life for a while was a nightmare! However, a question still circles my head, Did Tito's character of Dewey Dundoit accidentally exposed Jeffy's ego and bad side? That's what I want to know.

If I had to say of any ideas to improve in the future for future SML Videos, it would have to be that Mario, Rosalina and Jeffy have to be smarter about trusting bad people who screw them over! The Contract in the video was not allowed to be read even! Also, since you exposed Jeffy's bad side and ego, I would consider lightening up on Jeffy's jokes so that they aren't always him Torturing Mario, complaining about stuff he hates or doesn't get, making sure he doesn't swear and is sincere and learns to have better manners and learn from his mistakes.

Other than that, I would say thatI can tell it had a clear purpose to be a commentary on corporate Film and TV culture at times, but fell flat. Great idea that worked on paper but didn't get executed right in the video!

Overall, due to the concept, I would say that it's somewhere near a 7/10 and could of been better had you implemented my improvements beforehand.

At least you had a good Bowser Junior video, but be careful! having not very many good videos a week can be detrimental.

I Can;t wait for the next video and am glad that nightmare of a Jeffy video was over, Phew!