Talk:Jeffy's New Dad!/@comment-44288249-20200207112809

Well, here it is

PROS:

+The plot

+Patrick is back

+Jeffy didn't really side against Mario

+Goodman surprisingly wasn't that bad

+Mario didn't suffer all the way through, since the surgery saved him

+Brooklyn Guy was hilarious

+Screwball was pretty good

+The Star Wars scene was really cleverly made

+Mario's "crime" was what made for a good plot, and the torture wasn't about rock-stupid characters accusing Mario of something not even close to what he really did (like rape in Jeffy's Bad Word)

+The Mario puppet was only used for the last few minutes, but this time around, it actually had to be, since it would serve no purpose if it was used earlier on in the video, and would be there just because

CONS:

-The Mario torture was what triggered the plot, but still...

-Jeffy's songs were a bit annoying, especially the one in the ending

-Jeffy begging for his Legos

-Tyrone was a prick

OVERALL SCORE: 7.2/10. Congratulations, Logan! You finally outdid yourself with this video, and managed to do a Mario torture video right for once. It's not great, but it's the first good video of its kind (at least in my opinion).