Talk:Locked Out/@comment-1847247-20170418011628

This is the worse use of Jeffy I have ever seen in a video, and what's worse is that Mario knows that these horrible things are going to happen to him involving being locked out and getting arrested, but no matter what he does, he LITERALLY cannot avoid it.

Here's how you fix this story.

1. Make it all about Mario accidentally locking himself out on a day when he was suppose to watch TV for a very important special, and Jeffy is unaware of that.

2. Have Brooklyn T. Guy help him get back inside, but he would be acting more mellow and down to earth.

3. Then, have Mario act all frantic and crazy as if he thinks he's gonna get arrested for no reason, even though Brooklyn T. Guy is doing nothing of the source.

4. Have Jeffy just have a minor role, and only have him be seen where Mario gets back into the house

That's how you do this sort of video and not make it the universe out to get Mario and have Jeffy be this some ort of magical genie that exists to do nothing but torment Mario with no amount of punishment or self awareness involved at all.